

Aarmity Book I, Chapter 2Book I, Chapter 2: Pirate Problems.Aarmity Book I, Chapter 2
This is not good
Two figures stood in the aftermath of the battle between Zeth and Aarmity. One was small and slim, with forest green hair that was spiky in a way that it made it look similar to a palm tree. The other figure was gigantic and heavily armored.
Well, they left a joke like Zeth to guard the place, said the smaller one. No wonder someone could sneak in. Onox, can your sensors pick him up anywhere nearby?
Im afraid not, Envy, said the armored figure named Onox. If he did


Aarmity Book I, Chapter 1Book I, Chapter 1: Great ExpectationsAarmity Book I, Chapter 1
Zenatech Corporation Head Office Building Cyberville, USA Year: 2314
Okay, I know the times arent that great now, but this is just freaking ridiculous.
Roy Potter glared menacingly at the paperwork placed before him on his desk; as if he were hoping it would recoil under his gaze and slide away to bother somebody other than him. However, the world did not exactly work that way, not even in the magical world, where oddities occurred so frequently that wizards and witches took things like a jinxed frying pan flying around trying to beat p


Aarmity Horpter PrologueAarmity HorpterAarmity Horpter Prologue
Prologue
The year was 2108, and a global war had begun.
It all began with a freak accident; several American nuclear missiles were launched after a virus infected the launch systems. The missiles were sent to various parts of the world, and one even hit American soil. While America tried to convince the world that it was an accident, most of the world interpreted the launch as an act of a war. Afterwards, chaos reigned, and soon, the entire globe was at war with itself, and it was hard to tell who was fighting whom.
The United States was hit the hardest. It was clear that,
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Marik: Foolish fool! There are no women in Yu-Gi-Oh! There are only extremely girly men, and I am the most girly of them all!!
Pegasus: Keep telling yourself that.
-Quote from Yu-Gi-Oh: The Abridged Series
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...and that's why I'm awesome.
Just finished reading your newest version of Aramity. I like this version better it explained the other characters more. But what about Aramity's dog is he not in this one yet? They had a good friend relationship that I enjoyed in your other story. I really liked Zelda's Character take it she's alot like Edward. ^_^
Um only thing I saw that needed to be fixed is your wording. You tended to repeat yourself. I did that in my fanfic too so it's not a big deal. I had to constantly go through proofread and change. I know I still have mistakes somewhere. >_<
Found myself rewriting whole paragraphs just to keep from repeating.
As a whole I enjoyed this version and would like to read more. ^_^
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LIEKOMG it's so great to hear from an old reviewer again! I used to talk to so many of you but most of them disappeared after ff.net deleted script. Curse them.
But it's been so awesome back then. Silly, yes. Insane, absolutely. But perfectly awesome. Heh ^__^
Soooo, how're you doing?
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And those days were good days. Here I was, wandering through the internet one day and I suddenly came across that shiny fanfic of yours. How fun. Too bad the fanfiction.net nazi-- *cough* gods deleted it.
And like I said, I still write fanfics today, and they are mostly in that "silly humor" category. I even have plans to write a book. Which I could start writing this summer if things go well. (Gawd save us all)
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Marik: Foolish fool! There are no women in Yu-Gi-Oh! There are only extremely girly men, and I am the most girly of them all!!
Pegasus: Keep telling yourself that.
-Quote from Yu-Gi-Oh: The Abridged Series
And pray, which fandom do you write your silly humor for now?
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